Friday 7 November 2014

This week Room three have been learning to write with complex lists. Here is Iona's piece below. Make sure to check the student blogs out to read some other pieces.

 

winter


I love winter; the way the air is always crisp and fresh, how the snow sticks in your hair when you go iceskating, the splash of the rock when you complete your mission to break the thin blanket of ice on a pond, the way stripped trees stick out at odd angles.


This is my favourite time of year; curled up in a blanket beside an open fire, when the wind whistles and rain pelts as you are snuggled up in bed, the frothy, milky milo filled to the brim topped with cloud like marshmallows.


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