Wednesday, 3 September 2014

This week in Writing we have been looking at how we use nouns and verbs in a sentence to create clauses.
Here is some writing we did as a class

Fear drips off her whimpering body. A voice on the other end of the phone whispers haunting words. Her fingers twitch nervously on the side of the window. Her eyes widen.


  1. i know thats a really cool discription piece

  2. This was easy to write when you had the whole class doing it at the same time.

  3. I really like the way we used a dark picture and words that suit the picture


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