Wednesday 3 September 2014

This week in Writing we have been looking at how we use nouns and verbs in a sentence to create clauses.
Here is some writing we did as a class

Fear drips off her whimpering body. A voice on the other end of the phone whispers haunting words. Her fingers twitch nervously on the side of the window. Her eyes widen.
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  1. Anonymous3 September 2014 at 13:59

    i know thats a really cool discription piece

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  2. Anonymous4 September 2014 at 12:37

    This was easy to write when you had the whole class doing it at the same time.

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  3. Anonymous23 September 2014 at 14:13

    I really like the way we used a dark picture and words that suit the picture

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